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Comments of chapter undefined of Guardian of the Pacific: The Incredible Adventures of the Giant Turtle

Sorrias
SorriasLv5Sorrias

The grammar sucks, the chapter is too short, and you really need to work on your descriptions

MyQuietPlace
MyQuietPlaceAuthorMyQuietPlace

will be better after 10-20 chapters

TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Its good just chapters are way to short and lack details

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Joker333
Joker333Lv3Joker333

Thanks for the chapter

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Thiago_Gomes_8808
Thiago_Gomes_8808Lv4Thiago_Gomes_8808

Obrigado pelo capítulo

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Lisa_Silvan
Lisa_SilvanLv3Lisa_Silvan

That irregularity when saying its size bothered me and left me confused In other words, first that a mountain of fissures and then that only 50 or 60 approximately.literally uses the description of hundreds of tons is an exaggeration😑

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GrimmT60
GrimmT60Lv4GrimmT60

Plot twist becomes the turtle from strange world

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapters

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Fun chapter

EvilPenguin_666
EvilPenguin_666Lv4EvilPenguin_666

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv13SCP_UnKnown

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

Evangal
EvangalLv11Evangal

Finger crossed it's Gamera

Some_Guy_3
Some_Guy_3Lv4Some_Guy_3

Thanks for the chapter