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Comments of chapter undefined of DC/Young Justice: Colors

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Henry_0705
Henry_0705Lv4Henry_0705

This is a really cool story I can't wait til the next chapter comes out

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Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5Dieudonner_17

You’re good If this is your first time then this is Lionel Messi level talent

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Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

This story is amazing! I can see the Mc and Robin leading the next generation with Robin being his right hand man

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Anonny_Anonymous
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I’ve noticed that a lot of stories on webnovel seem to confuse the irises of the eye with the pupils. The pupils are always black so they can collect light. The irises are the colored part of the eye in a ring around the pupil. You kept saying that the pupils were changing color, which doesn’t make a lot of sense and would likely interfere with his ability to see. Do you mean his irises change color? Aside from that, I really enjoy your story. I’d like to see the MC master more stuff. With his photographic memory, there’s no reason he can’t get the equivalent doctorate degrees in many things. Why not try to one-up Mister Terrific, Lex Luthor, and others into being the comic book science genius?

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IgnisPrimus
IgnisPrimusLv14IgnisPrimus

Thanks for the chapter

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somerandomkid_17
somerandomkid_17Lv4somerandomkid_17

Bro this is legit the most hyped I've felt for a story in a long time this has the potential to be way better than Marvel:gacha Essence keep up the amazing work!

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skyhound
skyhoundLv14skyhound

Great chapter, Joker is definitely going to try and kill Mc like he did Jason Todd in canon. I like the name connection between them.

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Jaxandrealba_7
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General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

so the update schedule is once a week author?thanks for the chapter👍

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Land_Shark
Land_SharkLv13Land_Shark

Author I don’t know if you’ll see this but since every member of the bay family seems to get a pet or animal. I was hoping/ thinking that Dex-Starr the red lantern cat would be a wonder animal for him!

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Percy9
Percy9Lv1Percy9

No harem🙏🙏

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jahmii
jahmiiLv2jahmii

can we get the emotion for each colour in a list, please?

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Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv11Mysteries_

Essa é a melhor fanfic já escrita em muito tempo, minhas pedras serão suas de agora em diante.

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mugi19
mugi19Lv14mugi19

Is he gonna use his powers to help people get better or more in control of themselves? Seems fitting with him being bats sidekick

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Some_Guy_3
Some_Guy_3Lv4Some_Guy_3

Thanks for the chapter

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A_Y_Z_16
A_Y_Z_16Lv4A_Y_Z_16

thank you for the chapter

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter