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Comments of chapter undefined of OGI: The Hunt for Level Three

FA3zy
FA3zyLv3FA3zy

Paragraph needs to be edited but still there's an idea up there. hope you could improve your writing skills in the future[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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LEONOFZION
LEONOFZIONLv15LEONOFZION

I love prologues like this 😊

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Xero_5825
Xero_5825Lv4Xero_5825

BTW, I forgot to mention your synopsis looks like the essay i used to write in std.4, never mind😅

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ryosososo
ryosososoLv1ryosososo

Love the premise, am already hooked!

Sereinchoo
SereinchooLv2Sereinchoo

Great prologue - looking forward to how the earth would split into 4 zones

Loctovia
LoctoviaLv15Loctovia

It's a good opening chapter

THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
THE_GOAT_HIMSELFAuthorTHE_GOAT_HIMSELF

Hope who ever is resding this enjoys my first chapter