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Lengthy chapters, but they're my type, as long as they keep me engaged. This story managed to do that quite well, Ace's past was relentless but nonetheless it was good. I'm sorry if I didn't provide any critic, I enjoyed this story and don't have anything to point out really. Keep working and honing your craft!
I'm no professional reviewer, so there isn't much for me to point out. Characters, world, direction. All of the are fantastic. The world seems vast, and I can already see so much content to be explored. Characters show potential depth through the dialogue alone, and personally, Leo seems cool. Of course, the main character is well written from what I can see. Direction of the story looks extremely promising and I'm hoping it continues to advance and deliver well. All and all, I had to talk about what the contents of the story since the way information is shown really intrigued me. Keep writing this story, I'm already a fan!
The sheer scale is insane
Jacque didn't hold back on that one
My guy only cares about the money.
This novel is my cup of tea so it didn't take long for me to get hooked, It's very enjoyable. I can't critic it that much since I'm not a professional in that regard, but as a new author, for me, this story is great. I'll keep an eye on this one, so keep publishing chapters pelase!
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Mhm, honesty is good.
love the confidence