I think it’s to rushed. I mean he knew her for like a month. I would get it if that was his wife of 20 years or something but they relationship just starting out. I like it but I just think you should’ve waited for they’re relationship to advance more.
the more chapters go by, the further the story is from its title, The more chapters go by, the title of "the barber" loses more sense xd. I foresee a future change of the fanfic title to one more appropriate to the situation