Comments of chapter undefined of MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Terrorist

MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Terrorist

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hero4hireLv11hero4hire

This is very hard to read. I feel like its important so i had force myself to read everyline yet i hated every moment of it since the writitng feels like the journal of a schizophrenic person. Not a good start for a novel imo. Author is it by design or was it not edited/formatted properly?

3mth

MajorLove_GravyLv4MajorLove_Gravy

it doesn't flow very well and the added space between punctuation doesn't help

Nar_cisse:I fail to understand what is bothering you…? Could you be more precise ?

1mth

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PriamustheBrightLv11PriamustheBright

This was surprisingly good

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Infinite_Shadow_57Lv13Infinite_Shadow_57

Well I am confused, intrigued, and conflicted. Congrats

6mth

HumbuubLv4Humbuub

The chakra thing is a bit redundant. Senjutsu would be more appropriate since it's Nature based, Chakra came from Kaguya so if the world of MHA have no chakra then it won't matter.

7mth

RenpangshuLv12Renpangshu

Confused by good

Zbara_1577Lv4Zbara_1577

when I said reupload the fic, I did mean a completely new reupload, not deleting chapters from the original. Using a new one will ride the algorithm better to get more views.

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Zbara_1577Lv4Zbara_1577

what happened

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