KingSeyer
It's a decent story with a proper dialogue and grammar format, the main character though feels kinda lackluster. I get it you don't want him to get to OP so early but man 50 chapters in and you have him rescued like a damsel in distress, had his power stolen I mean copied his mind raped and now the Haitian can block his presumably potent power. And 50 chapters in and I realized that it still pretty much follows cannon? So my question is when is this story gonna pick up, what cannon-line is he gonna derail, and is there any progress in his so-called Godlike abilities? All that hype and nothing really changed, except for a love story that I'm not really that interested in. Hopefully it picks up.