KingSeyer
It's a decent story with a proper dialogue and grammar format, the main character though feels kinda lackluster. I get it you don't want him to get to OP so early but man 50 chapters in and you have him rescued like a damsel in distress, had his power stolen I mean copied his mind raped and now the Haitian can block his presumably potent power. And 50 chapters in and I realized that it still pretty much follows cannon? So my question is when is this story gonna pick up, what cannon-line is he gonna derail, and is there any progress in his so-called Godlike abilities? All that hype and nothing really changed, except for a love story that I'm not really that interested in. Hopefully it picks up.
The plot is going to derail very soon with a lot of changes, I just wanted the beginning phase to be slow in order for MC to mesh well with everything. A whole lot of things are going to change from the status of certain characters and a whole lot. It'll all come soon. Concerning his power, it's very complex in nature but don't worry, it'll evolve very soon. You'd even be surprised. Thanks for the comment though. This is the type of stuff, I've been wanting to hear from my readers.