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This is a very good start! I love the choice of words and metaphors used! Makes it very interesting and rich.
I was literally sitting beside the old hag. This explanation! The grammar! The vividness! It's like a VR. It's awesome. 3 P.S for you author. đ
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This is some Lovecraftian-level horror. Nice
Good chapter. Nice length too!
Very addictive head
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I'm hooked!!
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the name drew my attention but this first chapter has me hookedz I'm literally scared right now
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Realistic portrait, written in words. That's all I have to say.
Great work for the first chp of the story Pookie [img=recommend][img=coins]
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I love the author's descriptions.
Wow this is so descriptive, I felt as if I were th err. Your use if symbolism and metaphors are spot on. I love the slow build if suspense. You for my heart racing, and I definitely want to read on.
