Unfortunately, it only has one chapter, but it's a really good one. I feel as if I know the characters, and the story makes you want to read on. Not the typical story I've seen on here, but very worth the read.

No, I'm sorry it wasn't clear She's her mother.

She did it because she could. She was bored, and it amused her.

She was kinda like a sociopath. She just didn't care. He wronged her and embarrassed her - his price to pay was death.

No, she was trying to forgive her mother too, but her mother was making it difficult. Actually, she blames Talon's mom Anise.

I am glad you are thinking about the mother. I do believe it is a little of both, but I have a feeling we will be getting more on that situation in the future.

It's a flower that is poisonous.

She is, but her father never got tested for the gene that makes them immune, and neither did she...well her mom said differently. We're going to have to wait and see how that turns out.

I'm sorry, I'll work on fixing that. The connections are affuent people her aunt has already met. People with money and power. That's how Geneve was able to skip town after she killed her mother.. I say it later, but I guess it should be mentioned here as well. They are Fae. They can easily control humans.

Pain can do a lot to a person. Trauma has a way of changing a person forever. There are three main characters, and they all deal with their trauma differently. Sometimes bad things that happen to us and it points us exactly where we were meant to be.... sometimes they don't. Cross your fingers for Geneve. There i a still quite a long road for her to travel ❤️❤️

This is pretty good, it starts out exciting, and the storyline seems to be getting interesting. I am a sucker for anything with parallel Universes, and I like the authors vision.

I LOVE reading about parellell Universes. I never considered the mirror theory. It is a pretty good theory.

Same.

The transition here is a bit confusing, but I think I wrapped my head around it The queen went into another dimension into her younger body. I'd thst correct ? I will read on, maybe it will answer.

This was a unique beggining, for sure. It was pretty good. It left me with some questions that make me want to read the next chapter, in hopes of getting answers. That is exactly what a first chapter is supposed to do.

I am definitely a writer who thrives on constructive criticism. What information do you feel is lacking? I am writing an addition to chapter two already, based on suggestions.

Thank you!

This is a great story. The author is so descriptive they paint a picture with words. At times beautiful, at times exciting, always entertaining. You will not be disappointed .

I am so impressed about the way you word things. Nicely done.

Great starting! I love how descriptive this is. It really sucks you in.