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Comments of chapter undefined of Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

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MayaKeiran
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Kelvar10_
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I was literally sitting beside the old hag. This explanation! The grammar! The vividness! It's like a VR. It's awesome. 3 P.S for you author. 😎

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Galanar
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Moonyani
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This is a very good start! I love the choice of words and metaphors used! Makes it very interesting and rich.

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Godofstories
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This is some Lovecraftian-level horror. Nice

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NispedanaSan
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Good chapter. Nice length too!

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Tifala
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Very addictive head

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Walentine1
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this is getting scary [img=recommend]

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Mel_goddess123
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I'm hooked!!

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Sinbau
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luminance
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the name drew my attention but this first chapter has me hookedz I'm literally scared right now

Zefyr
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Zefyr
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Realistic portrait, written in words. That's all I have to say.

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Sinbau
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Great work for the first chp of the story Pookie [img=recommend][img=coins]

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Sinbau
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starryxl
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I love the author's descriptions.

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NinaChroni
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Wow this is so descriptive, I felt as if I were th err. Your use if symbolism and metaphors are spot on. I love the slow build if suspense. You for my heart racing, and I definitely want to read on.