HideousGrain
l don't know if it's because i have read too many of these situations or because it was too predictable it was well done but the moment you brought the couple fight they were only two scenarios either they accidentally got near him and attacked him and plot moves from there or someone else either a clerk or another customer gets attacked and he saves them maybe i am a choas junkie i needed something more spicy but either way fantastic writing so far good plot and wonderful world building i can't really say much about characters because they have not been fleshed out that much but they seem good and you already have a plan on how to develop them so thats good and i absolutely love mc's power and i would love to continue to explore the world your creating, hope you continue to write this amazing work and have a good day. đđĽ´