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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: Radical Redux

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Crushingheavens
CrushingheavensLv4Crushingheavens

NTR, mortal enemies that are constantly recurring and never die even though author says the MC is ruthless. These two are instant turnoffs for me.

Sethell
SethellLv1Sethell

+1

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SlySmile
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There's another fanfic that made a case with this pokemon, it quite fit in his own version of his story, and I quite like how it explained this one's uniqueness [img=thinking]

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Tom_Mayeu
Tom_MayeuLv2Tom_Mayeu

When a MC loses their memories, I'm out, instantly. Too many bad experiences. It feels like a cheap way authors try to forcefully create action/novelty while stalling the main plotline, tends to take too long, and why tf would anyone want to read about not quite MC breaking their relationships and losing their goals cause they can't remember who they are? Plus Alzheimer's is the leading cause of death in my family....

Clown_Of_God
Clown_Of_GodLv6Clown_Of_God

dynamax Dragonite

Iamurdad69
Iamurdad69Lv12Iamurdad69

Which Pokémon was that though?

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LadyDoragon
LadyDoragonLv3LadyDoragon

You know, the picture not filling the frame of this story's cover does look a little jarring in the night mode specifically. Not sure if you would want to bother with changing it a tidbit but i have an idea about how. If the white at the top and the bottom is part of the picture I would cut it out but if you have the picture without them then that's one less step. Then I would add a stripe of the red from the picture background that's the same width as the picture and the hight that the picture is missing from the standard cover hight. Then it would just be the case of choosing some good looking font and a fitting letter size and typing in the title of the story on that red stripe. I reckon that should look better.

Gabriel_fernando
Gabriel_fernandoLv1Gabriel_fernando

In mine case is in so many times why i call of extreme overdose of powers in Begin. 8 wishes, template gilgamesh madara solo leveling etc.

Kacper_Cwajda
Kacper_CwajdaLv3Kacper_Cwajda

Thanks for the chapter

Cody_Lee_Hoffman
Cody_Lee_HoffmanLv3Cody_Lee_Hoffman

Thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.