SlySmile
As long as it is good plot, not abused plot armor spamming, and has good depth and character development I'll read it!!! đđ
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SlySmile4dCommented"Hmm..." Mark nodded. "I get you. Even Naofumi's shield needed to transform so he could attack. A simple shield alone had limited capabilities unless you were skilled and strong enough to use it like a boomerang or bash it against enemies."- SlySmile6dCommented
*m'ussent(?) is this some kind of slang or accent? If not, then, -> "mustn't" or just use "must not"
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*smarted -> smartest
Articuno nodded and let Blanche climb on top, then they flew away. - SlySmile7dCommented
*picked -> piqued
Naomi remained behind, lost in her thoughts for a moment, before her eyes locked onto the direction of the guest area, her curiosity was now picked, her sister has never found anyone in the same range of age to let alone make her doubt her capacity to win, but even fight on par with her, so it would be a lie to say she wasn't interested on it. - SlySmile8dCommented
*consensus -> consciousness [img=thinking]
This paragraph has been deleted. - SlySmile19dCommentedAsh shook his finger in front of Bill, "No don't call me Ash right now," then he swiftly took out and out on a lab coat, "Call me Professor Fraxinus."
- SlySmile19dCommented"A lot more than you can imagine," Yoruichi said without a change in her casual tone. "For starters, he wants to protect me from harm. You, my former disciple, are looking to murder me. It's common sense to choose him over you, right?"
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Of course there would, you get defeated due to heavy nosebleed...
Soi Fon's eyes widened before her cheeks flushed. Coughing, she looked away. "Not like it will change anything." - SlySmile24dCommented
Lol đ
Using the hand speed he had honed in twenty years of bachelorhood, Lin Xun swiftly went through his options. - SlySmile26dCommented
Nope, too overwhelming for new trainers, if a rechallenge after getting the badge perhaps, but normal gym battles is a huge "NO" [img=thinking]
Should some gym leaders be able to use megas in their Gym battle? - SlySmile30dCommented"Push-ups, sit-ups, and plenty of juice," Ash said with a smile.
- SlySmile1mthCommented
Why is this status board broken? Still not updated?... [img=thinking]
Title : [The Prodigy] [The Gentleman] [Martial Artist] [Samurai] [Man of steel] [The degenerate] [The strong willed] [Gym rat] [The lone wolf] [The man of the house] [Investor] [The polite pervert] [Reader] [A handsome man] [The nice guy] [Breathing Master.]..... - SlySmile1mthCommented
This thing still didn't update... [img=thinking]
Title : [The Prodigy] [The Gentleman] [Martial Artist] [Samurai] [Man of steel] [The degenerate] [The strong willed] [Gym rat] [The lone wolf] [The man of the house] [Investor] [The polite pervert] [Virgin] [Reader] [A handsome man] [The nice guy] [Breathing Master.]..... - SlySmile1mthCommentedI call it, Operation MM (Mom is mine)
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*"But I do now." [img=thinking]
"But I do." I immediately said again. This time my mother face returned to a dangerous one while the Marin's smile returned to it's full glory. - SlySmile1mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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Yikes! Jiji is really mad... [img=nervous]
"Shunsui Kyoraku," Yamamoto called out in a low but intimidating voice and lightly struck his cane on the floor. "I, hereby, seize your captain seat." - SlySmile1mthCommented
*regen - region [img=thinking]
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*held - healed, *"not at least usable again,"? or you mean - "and at least is usable again" [img=thinking]
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