Comments of chapter undefined of The Vision

i hate sublime

Yes, we all need it! Everyone knows about this rule 😅👇

Pace is good. as long has things continue to ramp up.this chapter being a good example

yea speed up the chapters a bit. too many chapters of just training and daily slice of life things. get things moving with the whole registration/accords situation then progress onto the other films. introduce black panther too.

Basically x23

nice

More action and dialogue. At these point it's just vision talking to himself and making plans .instead of reading each chapter as they are updated I now wait few days to a week to stockpile chapters to read once.

thanks for the chapter 👍

hmm,bit weird for this too happen. if they wanted to do this it would have been better when the registration went public

too little descriptions and too much foreshadowing

Ty

I like the pace. The MC hasn’t made any major mistakes and is approaching the plot smartly. Nitpicking: he has the mind stone. Why can’t he use it to mind control Sublime? I don’t think it could hide from the MC given his psychic prowess. Presumably he could bring the attention of the bacteria to Reed Richards and Tony and they could figure out how to kill it if you don’t want to use the infinity stone to do it.

Thanks for the chapter Enter X23 ( Laura Kinney ) POV first battle

Thanks for the chap 👍👌💎

Thanks for the chapter!

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Thanks