Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood What If

I can understand the comments about stability and boring . Despite that , I wouldn't suggest drastically changing anything . One of the reasons is the update stability. with the update stability, any character development would just drag on . Also , I'm not sure about the meaning of good to bad or bad to good . I mean, obviously, this isn't an edgy story . I would prefer the current personality. After all, he is an old soul at the end of the day, and drastic changes in the personality would be absurd

The mc is fine as he is, of course he should be a bit more vengeful to those that attack him. But a bad mc is what every Hollywood novel has. It is honestly refreshing to have an mc like this, I'm not saying that he should be a goody two shoes. Using a bad guy character template in Hollywood brings fatigue at this point since each and every Hollywood novel is like that.

This whole agency thing is unnecessary. Of course one day Kazir could leave the CAA, but that's better off in the future not right now.

Kazir character ..is the main reason this fan fic is different from other Hollywood fan fic......... by changing MC personality ....is loosing it's uniqueness ..

Stable is good, it means you aren't f**King your life. Too much drama is also bad, just add a little bit of proper romance and we are good. Like make him court her, make effort in their relationship because his previous relationship were purely sexual and a tragedy.

What’s wrong with being stable? Does everyone want so much problem in their life? Isn’t the world already chaotic enough? Just leave it as it is but I do agree that the story plot line has been rather bland so I get why they want some excitement but please don’t make it at expense of the MCs character.

tftc~~~○●

thanks for the chapter

Dont change character too drastically. Like don't make him a typical Chinese harem, face slapping unrealistic SOB who does whatever he wants without consequence. the best part of this story it protag is atleast remotely human and hasn't completely deroled into a deranged psychopath. If someone is telling you that the protag needs to go that route tell him there are hundreds of novels that do that. (Hollywood made has a section where the author actively states pedophilia is fine). that not going unstable, that just going crazy. it's fine. the story is fine. go down the stable route. stable is good , it means character development done right. you could make the situation chatoic, don't make the character chaotic.

Thanks for The Chapter .

Thanks for the chapter

incase the author wanted to de-age Kazir he could make him graduate HS (or take GED a American thing you can take at 13- to graduate school )at age 15-16 leave house/home do films as an assainant (live with roommates,) 15-19/20 and use his college fund to make his first film at age 18-21(at age 18 Americans get access to College Funds without parental control) can have him marry his first wife young young 18, met her at 16-18. Can have him co-direct at a young age with a older director use his College Funds for his 1st film then do the next two movies solo, and pretty much have the storyline go from, there,,,, Kazir beard he can fake his beard/age Some very famous hollywood actors faked their ages to get roles lied about their ages up to a decade. Kazir could grey his beard to make himself look more experianced. and young people getting a full beard isnt unheard of.

Esta bien como es ahora ,es tranquilo y calmante leer cada capítulo que sube. No estresa la escritura y todo va bien.. Agregar solo unos cuantos puntos vista (POV)estaría bien para ver cómo la gente común ve a Kazir o personas importantes ya sean ( actores , actrices, directores).. Sigue así ..👍👍👍👌

I think he should stay away from all the sleazy stuff. He may live like a king now, but when #metoo comes around, it will be all over. It’s not worth it. It seems that even people with NDAs are speaking up.

I'm honestly a bit surprised that no actress is trying to trap Kazir by having him get her pregnant. It makes sense since he doesn't go out much, but even Reese and Cam had opportunities to get him to stay. Kazir doesn't have any children yet, the kid would potentially inherit all of his legacy unless he decides that it would make more sense for everything to go to his niece since he feels he won't have time for a family. Reese Witherspoon's daughter was born September of 1999 (funnily enough her birthday is on the 9th and if I'm remembering right that's also Kazir's birthday), but I'm guessing that birth won't happen because of the butterfly effect? Great fic!

I think being stable is good but my concern is that the mc selling all those copyright like it was nothing try to keep some of it or find different director to direct it because when you sell all those copyright some of it were classic movies and also a box office succes