Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood What If
Hollywood What If
pujimaki
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The mc is fine as he is, of course he should be a bit more vengeful to those that attack him. But a bad mc is what every Hollywood novel has. It is honestly refreshing to have an mc like this, I'm not saying that he should be a goody two shoes. Using a bad guy character template in Hollywood brings fatigue at this point since each and every Hollywood novel is like that.
I can understand the comments about stability and boring . Despite that , I wouldn't suggest drastically changing anything . One of the reasons is the update stability. with the update stability, any character development would just drag on . Also , I'm not sure about the meaning of good to bad or bad to good . I mean, obviously, this isn't an edgy story . I would prefer the current personality. After all, he is an old soul at the end of the day, and drastic changes in the personality would be absurd
What’s wrong with being stable? Does everyone want so much problem in their life? Isn’t the world already chaotic enough? Just leave it as it is but I do agree that the story plot line has been rather bland so I get why they want some excitement but please don’t make it at expense of the MCs character.
Dont change character too drastically. Like don't make him a typical Chinese harem, face slapping unrealistic SOB who does whatever he wants without consequence. the best part of this story it protag is atleast remotely human and hasn't completely deroled into a deranged psychopath. If someone is telling you that the protag needs to go that route tell him there are hundreds of novels that do that. (Hollywood made has a section where the author actively states pedophilia is fine). that not going unstable, that just going crazy. it's fine. the story is fine. go down the stable route. stable is good , it means character development done right. you could make the situation chatoic, don't make the character chaotic.
incase the author wanted to de-age Kazir he could make him graduate HS (or take GED a American thing you can take at 13- to graduate school )at age 15-16 leave house/home do films as an assainant (live with roommates,) 15-19/20 and use his college fund to make his first film at age 18-21(at age 18 Americans get access to College Funds without parental control) can have him marry his first wife young young 18, met her at 16-18. Can have him co-direct at a young age with a older director use his College Funds for his 1st film then do the next two movies solo, and pretty much have the storyline go from, there,,,, Kazir beard he can fake his beard/age Some very famous hollywood actors faked their ages to get roles lied about their ages up to a decade. Kazir could grey his beard to make himself look more experianced. and young people getting a full beard isnt unheard of.
