Comments of chapter undefined of Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Ehhh ... this is really awkward. The sequence of events is good but it's a solid block of "tell" with zero "show". I feel like I just read an epilogue narration. Of course, the MC was not really involved directly ... and it would take some time to show ... still, or needed some show. That said, with a third of the entire plot line resolved in a single chapter's narration ... well it could leave a lot of room for original plot, but I feel like 90% of that will be "buddying around the ninja world with my little brother Naruto", which makes me vomit. We'll see where this goes I guess?

Okayyy... I'm out.

Author, this thing is too good, it's practically an alternate timeline, like one of the Naruto movies is... This is very good, keep it up and you'll have a lot of fans-

It's almost too perfect, except for the Itachi part. But apart from that, it's almost too perfect that it's scares me.😨

it is perfect ,perfect everything down to the last minute details.....best fanfic ever.

Did our MC accidentally cause a coup?

The system offered for him to be the Indra incarnate? Dumb to turn down that power-up.

I thank you for the chapter.

hahaha hey author said they wanted to f up the plot 😂 and i support it

The most satisfying chapter 🎆

still itachi was not good. sad for him .

brilliant!! I hate when people drag the third, danzo issue for too long.

ahahahsjskasjjssk that's what I call the butterfly effect

Thanks for the chapter

Now this takes BALLLSSS to do what you did. Man I'm really impressed. Now just have to see if the rest are good too. Anyways this shit deserves 5* rating

Loving the changes and curious if he can learn from Tsuanada at all. Thanks for the chapter.