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Comments of chapter undefined of Overhauled

web_cop
web_copLv13web_cop

I feel like the author is going a bit too hard on midoriya, he’s a child who’ been systematically beaten, bullied, burned, and discouraged by everyone around him except his mom since he was four years old. Expecting him to actually do things like working out to improve himself is naive considering that while he has hope he can be a hero he never actually believed it to be possible, in fact he was constantly told it was impossible.

Risk6666
Risk6666Lv1Risk6666

This chapter was about nothing. This is not bad, because you as an author need time to prepare for writing a story chapter.

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

thanks for the chapter man and no problem, sleep is important, so sleep now, write later.

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

I honestly consider this chapter the best one so far, the most normal one too. Honestly all the previous ones were unnecessarily dark and full of unnecessary intrigue for a world as happy as MHA is, It has its dark parts but they are only when there are villains involved which until now there weren't any, but still the story was dark, not dark from the blood but the general feeling of constant despondency which was constantly irritating me, the prologue which should have given me context about the MC felt a heavy burden to read. I don't know if I am expressing myself correctly but this chapter was the first where I felt that the MC had a bit of freedom and room to breathe, It doesn't mean that the previous chapters were good and this is character growth, no, I still maintain that I didn't like the previous ones and I wish they were more "lighter"

Risk6666
Risk6666Lv1Risk6666

I hope MC will get rid of metal parts in the future because MHA is too electric and technokinetic quirks.

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Thanks for the Chapter.

BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv3BoredCrow

I have to say if you're incorporating metal body parts into this or as enhancements maybe you could add some cyberpunk stuff like the sandevistan just saying also thanks for the chapter

Averyun_imp
Averyun_impLv1Averyun_imp

Thanks for the chapter and rest up

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Thanks for the chapter, though the Deku bashing was a bit repetitive, though he’s not my favorite character either lol

Shiroeh2
Shiroeh2Lv4Shiroeh2

Now that I think about it, Nick could heal All Mighty? He could create new organs, no?

Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv2Dragon_forever

Thx

MrMike
MrMikeLv5MrMike

Thanks for the great chapter!

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

Memes_for_dreams
Memes_for_dreamsLv14Memes_for_dreams

Tftc