If I remember correctly Warframes and Gates aren’t made by humans so they’re ruled out.

Good story, not worth paying for every chapter. If there was an option to just spend like 5-10 bucks and unlock all current chapters then I’d keep reading, but I’m too impatient to wait for one free chapter a day and I’m not spending over 20$ on around 100 chapters. I’d probably spend 20$ on unlocking all current and future chapters but that’s not really an option.

Liked it but not enough to spend money on it or wait three days until I can unlock a new chapter. If WebNovel had an option of watching an ad or two every unlocked chapter I’d probably be down.

Considering the fact that midoriya was systematically bullied, beaten, and discouraged from the age of four I’m surprised he even managed to hold onto his dream of becoming a hero. Imagine ten years of being constantly told that you’re worthless and that your dreams can’t be accomplished. Now imagine a child going through that. The vast majority of suicides from bullying happen to those who are both older than him and have been bullied for a shorter amount of time as well, I think he shows plenty of mental strength from that alone. The fact that it was done from someone he considers his best friend is even worse…

I feel like the author is going a bit too hard on midoriya, he’s a child who’ been systematically beaten, bullied, burned, and discouraged by everyone around him except his mom since he was four years old. Expecting him to actually do things like working out to improve himself is naive considering that while he has hope he can be a hero he never actually believed it to be possible, in fact he was constantly told it was impossible.

Sorry if my comment seemed to be complaining, I didn’t really mean it that way but I’m not exactly an English major and writing feelings properly is an incredibly difficult thing for me. I appreciate your stories and realize that if I wrote stories they’d be nowhere near as good.

Okey after reading a few chapters ahead it’s seems I was wrong and you’ve thought through the explanation of the wand quite a bit. Still feels like an overdone trope but atleast the trope is done well.

I think the whole custom or ancient wand trope is overdone in hp fanfics, usually unless it’s something important to the actual story it just seems out of place and dramatic to me. Like the whole one of a kind miracle bird that sheds only one feather is just odd and unless it suddenly resurrects it doesn’t matter to the story. I would more expect something like a piece of lethifold to tie into the aspects of the soul that’s already prevalent in the story.

Looked pretty good until dialogue started and then it got to a point that I lost all interest, beyond the fact that she immediately claims to be a corrupted heroic spirit, which not only doesn’t exist in this universe but she tells a group of TEEN heroes that she’s corrupted after almost killing someone and expects that talks don’t go south…

It seems well done, though I don’t understand how the mc is gonna bond with Fisk so daredevil might be a beater fit, other than that maybe change Jean over to the Sun and replace High Priestess with Wanda

Paizuri should probably get some points as well

Uh don’t all of Rias’s contractors know that her peerage are devils? From my knowledge they’re normal humans so the whole “memory erasure” thing seems AU

I think both dawnguard and Dragonborn will be great to do, dawnguard because learning from a millennia old necromancer dragon is bound to be fruitful, and dragonborn mainly for the shouts and ahzidal. if he can mind control ahzidal through necromancy or something he could grow a massive amount.

I find it depressing that I know that the quote from balgruuf is ”burns my hold and slaughters my people” lol

Nice chap

Well your second chap made my day so thanks man!

Thanks for the chap

Author seems to have died a horrible death. We have concluded that the cause of death was fans of said authors book finding him and strangling them in a way to get him to post more often. They will be missed.

Isn’t is spelled Chief?

From what I understand Covid shouldn’t last more than two weeks so author might post a chapter soon? If you are still not better author then I hope you get better soon!