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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: The Journey

Jayasavage
JayasavageLv12Jayasavage

Thanks for the heads up, othe never really put the multiple leads tag, so it leaves me frustrated when I don't see the mc for like 20 chapters.

AidenUsmani
AidenUsmaniAuthorAidenUsmani

Storm

BrownCentore:Mr. Author who is in the harem atleast for now
EasymodeX
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I don't get how Natasha has a 'pre-existing' relationship when the chapter titles indicate the MC is active before she is even born.

MAO_Miaomiao
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I'm fine with everything above, but having arcs for secondary characters worries me. I hope it's "mini" as you say

Max_Dreamscape
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Cheers to your commitment! I hope you can fulfill these terms successfully.

White_Wolf_7506
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The way you explained it, i will take it as if you are serious about the story and will not drop it midway. so the questions are: How often will the update be? How many OCs are you going to introduce? How is MC going to develop in powers? Will it be like Iron Man through tech or experiments like cap America? You said Harem members will not be major leads so will they be OCs or minor leads?

Charlotte_Mage
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no offense or anything, but you do know what fan fiction means right? it means a a different veriosion of a story which what ever you may like, also of course it's unrealistic, that the whole point of novels, Luke every 2 years there is a world ending event

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

harem or smaller polygamous family , either one works . my need for harem in fanfiction is to not leave capable amazing beauties unloved to turn fat and sad like in Boruto or other simular products. 🤓

DeadpooI
DeadpooILv12DeadpooI

Will there be illustrations of the characters?

David_Aguirre_0691
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Can you say who will be the girls who will be the MC's couples?

Otaku_Gamer_00007
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Can you not just remove the Harem garbage

D_R_5303
D_R_5303Lv3D_R_5303

Yo viendo que parece que el autor es arabe, ara no ve,( los siento no me aguante el chiste). Y soy yo?, o escribió que sabe de la administración de harem?, señor autor me le quito el sombrero ante usted, si lo que estoy insinuando es verdad.

Crom_Darkstar
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seems interesting I leave it till it accumulates enough chapters . I wish you luck brother and I hope you story meets success

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idkwhatsthebest
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as a muslim, i can trust Arabs have the ability to make a harem story perfectly

Tiuh_Gojo_Senpai
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the part about only having female friends, even though I'm a man I prefer to have friendships with women, even more so if I have a harem, my friends will be my women so why look for friendship outside when

AlchemyBeast
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I'm in. I can't wait to start reading

Apannnn
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Thanks

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

does MC wash and use good personal hygiene after bloody work before he interacts socially with people? .... every MC needs cleansing magics or some equivalent abilities. 🧼🧽

Lc_The_Second
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I see lots of “big talk”. I apologize, but I ain't compelled to read, since the premise on itself is lacking for my taste. Furthermore, I'll come back once the story gets halfway through (500 chapters or so)