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White_Wolf_750614dCommentedThis Naruto is weaker than his canon counterpart. The Naruto in canon could produce more than hundreds of clones even after practicing but this one can’t even make more than 30
"Heh, screw stalling!" Naruto said as he wielded his tanto, grinning crudely. "I owe this loser for years of hate! I'm gonna kick his ass! Naruto then charged toward the Chunin, who had managed to dispel the last clones. As he turned his head, Naruto slammed his knee into Mizuki's face. The blow sent him stumbling back but didn't seem to be effective. Naruto followed, summoning clones, surprised that the ten he intended to summon merely came out as eight. Naruto's chakra was lower than he thought. The testing, training, and now this fight was waning on the jinchuriki's juice. But the blonde merely kept engaging. The clones and him drawing kunai and firing them on the off-balance Chunin. They hit yet once again do no real damage, simply annoying Mizuki. Who with a growl charged forward with a growl swinging in with a right hook. A clone leaped forward, catching the hook and pulling the arm back. Another blonde kicked him in the face while another swept his legs. Naruto smirked as he jumped into the air, another clone grabbing and spinning him before firing him at the down Mizuki.- White_Wolf_750614dReplied to AfroLord
I don’t care about the age problem as it can just be that more years in academy and they were taught theory in first year without any physical thing but if his mother is alive, it stands to no reason that he should fail. Parents will always help their children to stay ahead and you can’t say that he has too much chakra due to Kyuubi that his skill is falling behind because kushina too was a host to it and had great chakra, so she would help him to get better control. From what I see, other than reducing the hate the village have for him, there’s no effect of kushina presence on naruto if he is still below average
Ch 2 Chapter 2: Rough Start - White_Wolf_750616dCommented
Even if you think that dxd is relatively safe, the mc does know that there are fallen angels hunting for sacred gear users in his town. Don’t you think he just became a target with his sacred gear, so he should focus first on strength to be safe
But it is also a world that is in relative amount of peace. - White_Wolf_750616dReplied to Bronz_Deck
You know with god being able to see the future, it’s not too far fetched that he saw guns and made a sacred gear according to them
Wait, doesn't this resemble an RPG class selection screen more than anything? But how would a sacred gear work like that? WHY would a sacred gear work like that? After all, for all I am aware of video games did not exist while god was alive and crafting these things. And no explanation either? - White_Wolf_750616dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Enter Naruto Uzumaki
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Stan Lee is not one above all. He acts as eyes for watchers.
One Above All: Hello, Stephen. I know it is a lot for you to understand, but I was the one who brought you here. If it was possible, I wouldn't have brought you. - White_Wolf_75061mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter - 1 : The beginning
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The story is going great but the only problem is the updates. Anyway will you make the mc end up being the emperor or one of his girls cause if he becomes one, you will have to do a whole lot more cause people might think he just created the title himself so he could end up with it
Ch 79 77 - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to White_Wolf_7506
There was another fiction where the mc isolated two criminals, one male and one female in a desert and created scenarios where they fell in love with each other then took them to vormir. The couple were given a choice of power or love and as they both were criminals, even though they were in love, one sacrificed the other and the mc took the stone from them
But if gaining the soul stone requires losing someone you love, how can I obtain it without doing so? - White_Wolf_75061mthCommented
I have read a fiction where the team waited for thanks to get the stone. As seen in the movies, after gomora is killed, thanos does not get up immediately with the stone but is unconscious in the water. The team waited for that moment and took the stone from thanos’ hand before he woke up.
But if gaining the soul stone requires losing someone you love, how can I obtain it without doing so? - White_Wolf_75061mthCommented
How is a 6 year old 6 foot tall
Physically, I had a slight advantage in height, standing at 6 feet tall, but my tendency to carry a few extra pounds made me self-conscious. Determined not to repeat past mistakes, I accompanied Eswar on his morning runs and warm-ups, refusing to let myself succumb to the sedentary lifestyle that had once plagued me. - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to SamiOyakodonLover
Yeah the author is trying too hard to get him nerfs
Not only would it decrease his overall fighting capabilities, but it would also increase the time he must spend on a certain realm to improve his foundation even further. - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to peter_thomsen
Lack of sunlight causes skin to turn pale not hair to white
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Is tsunade still learning about qi or is it postponed?
"How about a stroll around the village? It's past the time for training after sunrise. It's good to clear your mind." - White_Wolf_75061mthCommented
I think his society existed here too but the him in Naruto world had already reached the end of his life and was desperate to find a disciple but couldn’t. As he was reaching the end, he created these caves and died. Then whole kaguya plot happened. Our mc comes from a parallel timeline and would have reached the same end as this one if he did not end up in Naruto world
"Fourth, and last. At the end, it says 'God of Martial Arts.' That is a famous title in my world. Only one person in history has inherited that title, and it's not me, although my master believed that one day I would achieve that title. The person who achieved that title lived two hundred years before I was even born, and his name wasn't 'Yujin.' In addition to writing a surname I shouldn't be using, I also wrote a title that is not mine. I would never do that!" - White_Wolf_75061mthCommented
I think it is more like only physical energy was needed. The qi at his level had expanded his mind a lot and as chakra is both mind and physical energy, the physical energy had to create a balance with his expanded mind
"No. As I said, this is a process that happens in childhood while physical and mental development occurs. For some reason, your body demanded a significant amount of physical and mental energy for the creation of large amounts of Chakra, and that's why you were bedridden for two months. It also explains why you're not fully recovered yet; your body is still creating Chakra." - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to anter987
It’s the shadows doing the trick
He managed to lift his hand and used it to gently stroke the girl's head. Apart from his master, this is the second person who has taken care of him in his entire life, so he felt very grateful. - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to readerbecamewriter
Hiruzen would think they both are doing hanky panky to make tsunade forget about Dan
Yujin woke up again after Tsunade. He watched her go to the bathroom and got up from the floor. Stretching a bit, he went outside and resumed his daily routine. - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to readerbecamewriter
Do you have any pic for the mc
"Now you look much better. The outfit you chose suits you well." - White_Wolf_75061mthReplied to Grenhaer
I think from mc’s perspective, if the fighting has reached till there, the war should not far away.
Dozens of people were engaging in combat. With hand movements, they could unleash fire, water, earth, and air. Their swords gleamed, and they constantly threw sharp weapons at each other.