Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

I love how Dumbledore is once again contributing to a self-fulfilling prophecy. Harry wanted to stay out of his way but he now has a justified reason to hate and go against Dumbledore. I wonder if Dumbledore will even realize this or if he thinks he already won. Plus, we all know that with things like this, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, so Harry is definitely going to grow from whatever tribulation this is.

Author should better be making the revenge arc as brutal as he can.

Very rarely do I find an author who is willing to inflict misery and torment on his main character. I'm really proud to have found a writer like you, I hope you get better at developing your stories. Keep developing until you are hated and loved by the readers of your stories.

I like this development somewhat. Harry needed some push to take things seriously with Dumbledore. He was always somewhat passive. After this, I think he will be more pro-active in ending Dumbledore's reign.

oooh this is a blood feud those can get extremly violent

You pulled a lot of this dialogue from Doctor Who... Matt Smith FTW. That being said, unfortunately taking this much dialogue made this chapter feel either lazy or rushed. Still looking forward to the next one though =]

This just seems forced

great chapter eagerly waiting for the next chapter. it gave me jon wick vibs

Makes sense why he's been having road blocks in his magic recently

Why is he so stupid? According to Dumbledore's behavior, it was clear for a long time that he would not leave Harry alone, so it was necessary to respond to Dumbledore's actions a long time ago, and not wait until a similar situation occurred

What was up with his rant. Was it just to make himself feel better.

Thanks for the chapter, keep up the good work!

Mr auther how far do you have this planned put because if you are making as you go that is some crazy talent in story writing man

Dam that was a good chapter

Esto fue oro

I m reality worried right now. Everytime something like this happended it mean a nerf for mc…

tftc~

Dr Who vibes from this chap. Lets see how thick his adamant wall is