Exactly 💯💯

There is a theory that Cannibal is in hibernation at Skagos, where locals call it the black rock. Also it was not explicitly confirmed cannibal has died. After Dance of The Dragons , the whereabouts of riderless dragons were unknown.

Cannibal?

Thanks for the update

*Medici...Not Megose

Alright I can go with that but still I don't want the system to be known or shared by anyone other than Naruto. Still this is your fic, you are the Author, you can do whatever you want, I will still follow this fic regardless of your choice. But please don't rewrite this fic anymore, it's already the 3rd(or maybe 4th) version of rewrite.

No...maybe to Hinata but definitely not Tenten...Tenten already shows that she is a gold-digger by taking that deed from Naruto.

No

I think Bleach's Kido and Hado's power systems will go well along with Uzumaki's fuinjutsu, ninjutsu and Kekkaijutsu as they are more likely spell for Way of Binding(For Fuinjutsu or Juinjutsu) and Way of Destruction(For elemental ninjutsu) as well as some Space-Time forbidden barrier spell(Kekkaijutsu) Hachimon created.

Neverlusen

Very Interesting Concept. Will be waiting for the update.

Will be waiting eagerly.

Yeah and also you have the option of making auxiliary chapter of glossary where you can update the necessary information as you go through the chapter/volume that way readers don't have to read a infodump. Anyway that's just my suggestion, keep up the good work.

Another thing you should focus is to make the main character have a proper in-depth background so that he has a strong ambition for power.., Readers won't relate with the MC if he doesn't have any proper motivation to become stronger, I say this because from what I read this novel seems to have a power fantasy thing based on MC getting a System that can copy power. Although I must say you did a good job on the MC's personality and character as he is very likeable because of his scheming and shrewd personality.

Also the explanation regarding the gap between the Power Ranks and Hierarchy even if its'svague should be enough to make the reader interested without spoiling the future plot.

First thing you need to do is make a detailed explanation about the systematic power/abilities of this world.

I think the plot, story is all good....but the world-building, power systems are still hasty and not fleshed out enough. My suggestion is to revise the previous chapter and make more detailed storyline, that way it will be more realistic and reader will get deeper immersion.

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Dany