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So what did we learn? 1. Longbottom gains more fame for ‘defeating the dark lord’ 2. Now students assume Harry is weaker then the ‘chosen one’ because he suffered more while longbottom saved the day. 3. Longbottom claims more points for his house, and not getting in trouble for almost causing a students death. 4. The auther hates giving Harry any type of fame, or revenge for the teachers actions. 5. This novel is trash, im only reading because latterly read everything else, I’ve never been this outspoken before, maybe because the begining was SOOOO GOOD, and promised SOOOO MUCH. And then BOOM! We all get a scared MC that hides his power and doesn’t even TRY to do anything about his situation and let’S EVERYONE walk over him. This novel has been the most dissapointing FF I have ever read. I’ll be writing my first negative review for it so yeah. Idk if I’ll be here anymore guys, I know there’s a lot of you that have the same thoughts and feeling for this story and are still holding on for the same reason as I am, and I’m genuinely happy I wasn’t the only one extreamly disappointed and holding on.
seriously?? Harry could've died there due to his fuc*ing mistake and yet he gives longbottom 200 points, come on man even though Dumbledore is a hypocrite the rest of the wizards ain't so dumb honesty it's ruining the story by making things simply just revolve around the plot character's like some sort of harem isekai..
Let's be honest, most people would panic if they were born into a world like Harry Potter's and found out about it. It's completely normal to not want to be famous. Fame has its downsides too, always craving attention can be annoying at times. It feels like you're constantly being watched. It's better to keep such things secret if you can because many people just want to use you. We live in a cruel world, unfortunately, where that often happens.
At first I was kind of dubious about the MC even more so after his backstory where he's basically the self-sacrificing lord, the story gets better as time goes on to things I don't like like clearly the MC isn't going to get involved with magic black or ancient magic, he is more proactive in an academic way but clearly he is not preparing to survive a war, he wants to be remembered so that means it is impossible for him to stay out of the war he would lose a lot of influence and be seen as a coward, after this chapter feels like he's going to take things more seriously, I want to see real magic, rituals and all, I like the pace but it could be a little faster, I like that the author doesn't try to mix science, technology and magic which is one of the things that kill the story for me, and don't even be extremely critical about the magical world is one of the points that I like a lot, I found the friendship with Hermione unnecessary he had everything to lose and nothing to gain by getting involved with her but I understand that it was for his character development, I like that the lineage of the characters does have an influence on their magic.
While I'm glad to see your explanation and the idea of further world exploration, no one asked you to write the perfect, uber-powered protagonist. What is being asked is an attempt to protest. If you look at canon Skeeter, for example, you'll find an unethical journalist who'll write anything for publicity. Those "Imperioused" Death Eaters nearly got Dumbledore kicked out.
Personally, I have enjoyed the story so far, I think most people want the character to be overpowered, and immediately go their own way, and do their own thing without worrying about any of the repercussions. I feel like you’ve made a more realistic main character who is understandably conscious about angry or getting in the way of two of the most powerful wizard alive at this time. Grindelwald could obviously be added into that list, but I’m not really sure he’s up to any kind of fighting shape right now lol. Overall, I think his actions have been understandable in a way to try and not get involved in the main story while also still trying to learn the magic he loves and get involved with things that interest him.
The entire end comment is mute. This is an Isekai story of an "ADULT" being reincarnated. This should be very little character growth. You don't change much as a person after the age of 5. This is plain truth of the matter. Anytime an author tries to show growth like that it inevitably ends up making the m.c "Stupid for tension/drama." If you want a story about character growth, you can't do it very well with a grown adult. Story with an universe character and give them memories of another and tag it "otherworldly knowledge" but don't make it an Isekai. That way they can actually be 11 and things will make sense. The m.c shown here isn't suppose to be 11. He was and still is a fully grown adult in a child's body. nothing less nothing more.