Argent1971
lo unico que puedo decir es que mejoraste y a lo grande
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Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one
Grain
I already like the synopsis.
I like grain 👌
Horrible start.
Nice start
Wasn't this MC a Valyrian? Why does he look like Yi Ti?
Thanks for chapter
It was great I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for the chapter and more
Thanks for the chapter
Buen comienzo
still need work
fantastic rewrite so far keep up the great work