Comments of chapter undefined of My eternal hate for the Gods

First chapter: The start fabulous, the change of scene made me think the draw elf is the demon from the first scene reincarnated continuing the cycle of fighting the goods. The personal problems the "mc" has are on point a adopted child, with a racist brother, for the first chapter this is good.

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harem?

So you aren't writing in reported speech?

As first chapters go, this one checks all the boxes. You've got a prologue of a demon lord who obviously didn't survive that battle, and pivot to a young orphan northerner who I assumed inherited the dead demon lord's soul — yep, good job. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Thanks for the chap

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A strong start but I recommend using Grammarly to help with your punctuations. It was sort of hard planing the emotions and tempo of the scenes without it but overall. This was a good chapter, I definitely enjoyed it.

The start is amazing though I have noticed a few mistakes to be corrected. Hope you can check it out sometimes