Denis_Dragoescu
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o the sentence should be "Thorkell, come, hurry, we got to get to the docks"?
First chapter: The start fabulous, the change of scene made me think the draw elf is the demon from the first scene reincarnated continuing the cycle of fighting the goods. The personal problems the "mc" has are on point a adopted child, with a racist brother, for the first chapter this is good.
Smartest person I've ever seen in medieval fantasy books or games.
Good. Kind of a cliche, but works.
Racism!
I don't know if this kids is the mc or not. But this kid feels something is wrong, makes me feal more intrigued on the first part of the chapter.