lol yeah

yeah, it is going to happen, so pay close attention

Do it, you know you want to

I believe the story has great potential for the direction it is going. Hopefully, the author doesn't lose way to reaching that point. besides that, I do love how the author recommends music to listen to when reading certain chapters that a nice touch and hope they keep on doing that from time to time.

The musical

A book titled like that I think

aren't they always

Oh thank you

good to know

omg their here too

Well, the book is good. The way it is going, just make sure this isn't the same as the other one might need to change the name, not sure. beside got nothing to point out, so many sentences are good and done well, so keep it up, bro.

and then he got hard

forgot the .

what kind

lol crack

you know when people read they are going to read this first

Story has it elements of interesting peaks that I believe the further this goes on, the more growth it will gain from people who would love to read it. just make sure to add some hot and crazy twists and turns in it.

There's not much to go on with just 4 chaps, but overall, it bot that bad of a story, just a few grammar that need some corrections and that all. so just keep up with the story, alright.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

isn't there always