Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
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All right, man, the fic's off to a great start. The only problem is that he contacted Gwen too quickly. He could have waited a bit, read her memories and then slowly revealed himself. I mean, if I saw an organism merging with me, I would inevitably scare, freak out and call for help immediately. He was a bit careless here. And this could be a problem if he accidentally pretends to be human. If he revealed himself after a while, I think he could have used an excuse like 'I studied your world while I was with you'. Anyway, the fanfic is good so far, it would only be more realistic if he is more careful in the later parts or if the people he gets merging with don't accept him right away. On the other hand, Instead of this, he could swallow some of them completely.
While Gwen Stacy and Alex ( symbiote ) experiment with her new symbiote powers and Alex somewhat modified the young Gwen Stacy variant, including unlock her powers and supply the additional needed for being fully bonded to him ratio is in the works . As Alex unexpectedly took control of as she didn't need her webshooters as jumped out the window, HAHA ! We'll see how it goes next time for our unlikely Ghost Spider Gwen Stacy and Alex ( symbiote ) as Gwen 's wild ride reaches symbiotic new heights at the meantime . Continue on Catch ya later Cheers !
Btw I want to use to this new Fics of yours to congratulate you for your word or style used. It is flowing, yes flowing. The vocabulary is rich, accurate and use professional term when needed. I look at your others novel same thing. I lack writing talent but I can recognize something good đđ˝ when I see it so keep up the good work. With your current skill level, you could write an original novel but keep it simple as this is where author fall.
