Comments of chapter undefined of Creati Hero: All-Father[Completed]

I think the mc needs to be older in this scene. like 9-12. it gives time for his quirk to plausibly awaken like that(and makes it feel like he earned it.) You also immediately removed the only antagonist present removing all suspension. I understand you want to audience to hate father but that'd be better achieved by having the abuse build up rather than having some mean words and this incident only. The real issue is how mature the mc is talking to mother after this, literally giving her domestic abuse counselling. 1. this is eerie af and mc should act like a genius not an adult comforting a woman as a 4 year old. 2. Momo can't even talk properly yet (which makes the mc a creep instead and ruins any development the incident could have had on her character and the mc's relationship. You could improve this with minimal editing and maybe some earlier chapters to demonize father better than just outing him as a pedo. Anyhoozle, great novel concept—only reason I'm actually giving feedback.

Too rushed, beating the dad this early and in the same chapter as he starts turning into more of a villain than an just being an *ss makes the scene feel like a nothing plot rather than have any sort of impact.

That's how the rich are, they do what they want because they have so much power that when they are bored they let the demons in their minds do what they want

Very good story and very good idea for a story I hope you don't abandon it

Tnx for the chap 🙏

Hmmmm

Thanks for the chapter.

Thank you for the chapter

Thxs for the chap

Gud

it's not too early for sorting out an evil male bio investor, as some pervs have stated. violent nasty predators aren't patient the way TV or other media portrays them. if you investigate some local, national, or world news; this gives true insight into the inner filth that wears the outer skins of human beings. so far this reflects every possible socioeconomic background domestic habitation plausibility.

Man i was so used to good parents of momo’s family that it now feels surreal to see his father a degenerate

Too implausible. If you had left him a full memory of his past life, you could still believe it, and so, you made the main character too conscious at his age. The father's behavior is also inadequate, for a person capable of managing such a large company, in the sense that such addictions, if they exist, are not blurted out so casually, especially in his own home. If they had a family of poor drunks, it would be a different matter. In general, after reading this, I want to shout: "I DON'T BELIEVE IT"!

What just happened?

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i like that he took out the father if hes such a person but half the fun in such stories are the consequences. if noone knows what our MC did and he gets off scott free without repercussions, thats just a dissapointing story point. If the Father is just a Zombie in the background from now on, you should have just killed him and make the story more interesting that way. lets see in the next chapter :D