It's probably too early to tell, but your character is pretty boring. Too detached from others, how can such a person assemble a harem?

Hahahaha... Marimo is incomparable!

Thank you, I really liked this fan fiction. Rebel against the Gods is one of my favorite books and I am very glad that there was an author who could write a worthy work on it. I will look forward to continuing.

it is annoying that the main character practically corresponds to the archetype of an ordinary Japanese schoolboy.

the author does not suffer from nonsense and finish the work on bleach already, please

It's a little annoying when the authors, in order, allegedly, not to make the hero too op, make an imba of others, even if they are teenage children, and the hero, with his experience, knowledge, second life, and so on, remains to smoke bamboo. As the famous saying goes: "born to crawl, can't fly"; so Urahara, apparently, has less potential than his sister, apparently this is what the author is trying to tell us.

Потеряла сознание? Как удобно получилось! Автор, ты когда что-то придумываешь, хотя бы в уме прокрути то, что пишешь и подумай, как это выглядит со стороны. У тебя абсурд получается.

Too implausible. If you had left him a full memory of his past life, you could still believe it, and so, you made the main character too conscious at his age. The father's behavior is also inadequate, for a person capable of managing such a large company, in the sense that such addictions, if they exist, are not blurted out so casually, especially in his own home. If they had a family of poor drunks, it would be a different matter. In general, after reading this, I want to shout: "I DON'T BELIEVE IT"!

In previous chapters, when Kiske fought with Ares, their fight was posted online, that is, the whole supernatural world saw it. So, how, knowing the strength of the main character, can the whole world fall for his trick?

One of the best fanfiction in the world is one piece, if not the best of all that I have read. The main character, the characters, the plot – all this is at the highest level. I thank the author).

At the moment, this is my favorite work on the dxd universe. A strong, in all respects the main character, a wonderful variety of worlds, lively characters and an exciting plot. I have never regretted the time spent.

Amazing fan fiction! I am delighted and look forward to each release of new chapters. Thank you author! This is one of the best books I've read.

I'm sorry, the author, but I'll end at this point. you write well, but you give wishful thinking, showing such a romantic relationship, without going all the way from the beginning to the present moment. The main character didn't do anything surprising for the girls to agree to such a relationship, at least I didn't see enough to believe it. You didn't show the readers a lot of missing steps so that he could achieve such a result.

Author, are you serious? The hero of the fan fiction reminds me of Usopp from One piece with his 8,000,000 followers. And if they believed him, then their intelligence is no more than that of Luffy and Chopper. Can't you see for yourself that this is complete nonsense?

Well, why is this book in the Blue Wind Empire when it should be in the Azure Cloud?

I must say, I expected about this - another good work that the author could not finish. What is the reason? It doesn't matter to me as long as the author is alive and well, everything else is nothing more than an indicator of the irresponsibility and laziness of a person who is not able to finish the job.Very sorry.

I must say, I expected about this - another good work that the author could not finish. What is the reason? It doesn't matter to me as long as the author is alive and well, everything else is nothing more than an indicator of the irresponsibility and laziness of a person who is not able to finish the job.Very sorry.

I must say, I expected about this - another good work that the author could not finish. What is the reason? It doesn't matter to me as long as the author is alive and well, everything else is nothing more than an indicator of the irresponsibility and laziness of a person who is not able to finish the job.Very sorry.

fairy tail or Attack of the Titans

Very funny reading. Although it is not very serious and without much semantic load, nevertheless I was strongly hooked. If anyone knows similar fan fiction, please tell me! I would like to read more such works.