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Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv13The10thCrow

author don't be discouraged this story is very much interesting it's like an ancient allegory but viewed in normal sense. we want pretty girl we want op mc but you main it interesting that's why it's amazin.

BookDragonling
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There has been literally no evidence of this being the Percy Jackson world. The MC just randomly decided it was in the first chapter. Only to then have all the evidence show that it probably wasn't. So can anyone tell me why the MC is so hung up on this being the Percy Jackson world?

ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for chapter.I wanted to share a picture of Hera that I found in another story.

Zbara_1577
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This is top 10 in opening chapters to a fanfic, of all time. Your writing has also improved compared to the last story, it's more readable and flows better.

AenarionVoldigoad
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Eren_fraser is this reality A supreme beings dream like Elder Scrolls and Cthulhu Mythos

The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv13The10thCrow

this is far better than any PJ fanfic this is about the nature dreams it's undeniable effect on those who have free will. this is a about much more look at it through the lense of philosophy and all we can see is a main character burden with free will and unlimited power for me that is much more instresting than any fanfic

carefreeshadow
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hmmm.... it seems like the mc could save the earth mother but it would be like pulling in a end game boss half way through leveling right? it seems even if he saved her she would be a neutral party in the end and possibly a future issue....

LeficiosTV
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Thanks for the chapter.

TypeVos
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Something I've noticed, and it seems like it's not just me. Your writing style and flow have improved over the course of these last "3" novels. It's not hugely noticeable, but you can see it and feel it when you read. I'm not sure what your intentions are for the future, but I think you are doing amazing!

BlackDeath53
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You could do a crossover with record of ragnarok. It would be interesting

Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2Sakra95

And than that being of near limitless power turned powerless because she was lifted of the ground and than put back to sleep by a demigod.

Anonny_Anonymous
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*rolls eyes* she wouldn’t threaten him over asking a simple question.

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

Thank you for the chapter đŸ„°

Aydehan
AydehanLv13Aydehan

Bakalım bunu ne zaman bırakacak göreceğiz. Umarım yakın zamanda bunu bırakmayı dĂŒĆŸĂŒnmez.

parad8x
parad8xLv4parad8x

thanks

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14ManasCiel

Thanks for the chapter!

Coldman
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watzJ
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Good chapter, thanks