Lucifer09
Basura total El mC no debería haber remplaza a severus snape , no le pega . Un cambio demasiado corto y abierto mC despiadado y demasiado frío No vale nada el fanfic
write wizards and witches not magicians. magicians are muggles who do card tricks
That was short. Me need more
Why add this as a chapter...waste tbh
Wizards and Witches just saying Magicians makes them seem like their stage magicians.
es genial la historia, dejas con ganas de saber que sigue
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Why is there <br> things in the story it breaks the flow of the story
arreglalo
the dialogues are so weird and inorganic
¡Gracias por el capítulo!
2 points for your book
there's no dean n Harry Potter ryt?
Can anyone tell me what year he is in currently?