Lucifer09
The grammar is absolutely horrible
write wizards and witches not magicians. magicians are muggles who do card tricks
That was short. Me need more
Why add this as a chapter...waste tbh
Basura total El mC no debería haber remplaza a severus snape , no le pega . Un cambio demasiado corto y abierto mC despiadado y demasiado frío No vale nada el fanfic
Wizards and Witches just saying Magicians makes them seem like their stage magicians.
es genial la historia, dejas con ganas de saber que sigue
error
Why is there <br> things in the story it breaks the flow of the story
arreglalo
the dialogues are so weird and inorganic
¡Gracias por el capítulo!
2 points for your book
there's no dean n Harry Potter ryt?
Can anyone tell me what year he is in currently?
