Guryon
It will take some time to read more so mini review. As with many novels once "new" things are introduced it gets worse, especially in fanfic and even more in none crossover. The level of plot armor and mental manipulation that was used so people ignore what Adam did to Malfoy.... it was a joke. Their reaction was beyond subdued compared to what happened. The emotion thing he had, not sure where it is going, hopefully nowhere. There were a few chapters in the past 20 that grammar quality went down, maybe due to rushing release. The MCs personality is also... very unbalanced, he changes often. Personally I don't think he did anything I would consider bad until he decided to leave the girl with the diary, but thats mostly the author decided, for plot! Still bad