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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic

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Ghuus
GhuusLv2Ghuus

Que top pô, não sabia que você era brasileiro não. Parabéns pela fanfic, uma das melhores que eu tô lendo no momento.

Guryon
GuryonAuthorGuryon

Obrigado pelo comentário, sou brasileiro sim. Bom saber que outros BR estão lendo minha fanfic também. Qualquer sugestão é sempre bem-vinda.

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Connor_Stokes
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I think that just naming it simply would be good. I personally like the name, “Infinity”. Because it ties into the idea that the only limit on magic is the imagination. So I vote for the club name to be Infinity or something along those lines. Infinity, Ouroboros, or such.

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ErozothDraeor
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It will take some time to read more so mini review. As with many novels once "new" things are introduced it gets worse, especially in fanfic and even more in none crossover. The level of plot armor and mental manipulation that was used so people ignore what Adam did to Malfoy.... it was a joke. Their reaction was beyond subdued compared to what happened. The emotion thing he had, not sure where it is going, hopefully nowhere. There were a few chapters in the past 20 that grammar quality went down, maybe due to rushing release. The MCs personality is also... very unbalanced, he changes often. Personally I don't think he did anything I would consider bad until he decided to leave the girl with the diary, but thats mostly the author decided, for plot! Still bad

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JohnWicksPencil
JohnWicksPencilLv14JohnWicksPencil

Welcome to the Arcanum… The Club Arcanum

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Andres_Niebles
Andres_NieblesLv1Andres_Niebles

I vote for 'beyond imagination'

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DarkIfall
DarkIfallLv4DarkIfall

Order of Ouroboros

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Dominus_Imperius
Dominus_ImperiusLv5Dominus_Imperius

dead magus society?

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lee_lee_0533
lee_lee_0533Lv4lee_lee_0533

he said not to be normal so call the group the irregulars

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Somnifer
SomniferLv12Somnifer

Thanks for the chapter

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uncreativeguy
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Name it something stupid to confuse everyone else, but in reality, it actually has a pretty deep meaning like the Circular Table, which references the round table, which is where all of King Arthur's trust men sat.

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Lumn
LumnLv15Lumn

Order of Magic

Chyzuri
ChyzuriLv4Chyzuri

tarot club

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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

I think KALEIDOSCOPE would be a good name...

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FAMHDTVPNG
FAMHDTVPNGLv3FAMHDTVPNG

thanks for the chapter

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Taragorm
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Avalon being a nod to merlin and arthurs legend mythical island makes sense with the flying city symbol

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streiz
streizLv13streiz

Thank you so much for the chapter I love it!

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Zaelum
ZaelumLv5Zaelum

Dongus Longus At Author Assus Club!

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ImWatchingYou
ImWatchingYouLv2ImWatchingYou

( Ouroboros Order )- Western tradition via ancient Egyptian iconography and the Greek Magical tradition. In line with Hogwarts motto and their focus on getting stronger..

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Jordan2
Jordan2Lv14Jordan2

Great

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Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv14Sommerscave

P.S Maybe its actually gonna be Ouroboros Dragon Club. A small refrence to DXD with its Imagination Magic would be cool.