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Bro, don't ruin your novel with a harem. Just don't.
If you want to choose Ciri, pick her more at the beginning of her journey because some pretty tough things happen to her after a while :(
That's a good question. For me at least, this is what would make me continue to read the novel or drop it here
Now, just be careful with adding girls left or right. Don't let your novel be ruined by stuff like this. Focus on battles; let him interact with some girls little by little. Don't make people fall in love with him at first sight. Focus more on battles for a while, and stuff like that. Other than that, a great chapter as always. I'm curious to see what happens next.
Just a little bit of advice: don't give him too many types of powers; otherwise, you're going to have so much on your hands that you will lose track of what he has. Plus, with more and more powers, I feel like he's going to be further and further from being a lancer, which is his whole thing.
Well, to your first point, I don't anyone who is about to die would think like that. "Oh, you know what, I'm not even gonna use my full power, cause even if I did I'd still lose, let me just die 🤷🏻♂️". And no, I wasn't talking about this, I was talking about the the hand and the foot, the nerf he has right now
Bro, I really don't get this. Okay, from the beginning, it's understandable that he wouldn't win against Yamamoto, and I don't think anyone would complain about that. So why do they keep nerfing Adam? Even now, after he lost, it seems like he's going to fight with even more nerfs. The guy's going to fight with one hand and one foot. If he couldn't win before, there's not even a shred of enjoyment in reading this fight, not even with the new skill he learned.
Bro, so nothing really changed? At all? Just his intentions? That's so frustating. If he knew, and we all know he knew, that Urahara would just use him for his plans, he could just tried to do something earlier. Maybe had this talk before, that he wold not accept being a pawn in someone elses game, or said that if he felt like he was being manipulated he would fk up his plans or something. Theres thousands of different ways to go about it. Even being thrutfull with his thoughts. But no, he decided to be a pawn and go with how the story should be. The frustating part about this is not even how that's not his personality at all, is also the fact that this IS A FANFICTION, it is supposed to be different from the original story, otherwise why is he there? What is he doing? Just running and complaining? And by the looks of it, he's not even stronger than he was when he got there. I don't get it man
I don't know, bro. I feel like this nerf (even though it's temporary) is really unnecessary. They just don't want to make him strong from the start. The whole point of his power in Fairy Tail was that his zanpakutou trained him to control his power well enough so he wouldn't hurt himself, and now he has become weaker because he can't control his power? Is he like a hurricane or something? I don't buy it, sorry. With that being said, I really like your story, and you're an awesome writer, my man. :)
Great chapter as always, my man. Just one thing though, and this is my personal preference. I would rather that the MC stayed in Soul Society instead of going to the human world with Kisuke and the other shinigamis. That's already what happens in every fanfiction. Let the MC stay in Soul Society, make a name for himself, get a good position, and everything. That way, when Ichigo goes to SS to rescue Rukia, you can create some interesting interactions between them all.
True that my friend