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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus3mth
    Commented

    Bro, don't ruin your novel with a harem. Just don't.

    So, should I do a harem or not? I want to get a clear answer in advice so I can properly prepare for it.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Replied to EzioAuditore_1

    If you want to choose Ciri, pick her more at the beginning of her journey because some pretty tough things happen to her after a while :(

    Or Madame Aisha may show up thanks to her ability to hop dimensions but who knows? Either way, if she shows up, I will deal with her myself. Even though her kindness is infinite, she represents the extreme of kindness to the point where people actively avoid her because of her nature.
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    Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Replied to sh0b

    That's a good question. For me at least, this is what would make me continue to read the novel or drop it here

    'It's because I find her cute,' replied Mordred, absent so much as a hint of hesitation. Then, shrugging, she added, 'Unlike you, I come from a world where girls as young as four were traded between families of farmers and groomed to be brides or extra hands. You might find Presea's appearance childish, but I find it charming. Besides, from what I've been told, she's at least twenty-eight, going on twenty-nine. If no one else claims her, I have no qualms about taking her in myself.'
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Commented

    It's not a bad fruit, it's just soooooo over used. Every single fanfiction that you read the MC somehow get's a shadow clone.

    Ch 18 Eating Devil Fruit!*
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Commented

    Now, just be careful with adding girls left or right. Don't let your novel be ruined by stuff like this. Focus on battles; let him interact with some girls little by little. Don't make people fall in love with him at first sight. Focus more on battles for a while, and stuff like that. Other than that, a great chapter as always. I'm curious to see what happens next.

    Ch 26 An End To Instruction For A Spear Boy
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Commented

    See, this was my problem with all the powers. Seeing this fight, he fight more like a ninja from Naruto with all the clones and jutsus, than a Spearman :( But that's me personal opinion tho, great job anyways.

    Ch 18 Queen VS Spear Boy Part 1
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Commented

    Just a little bit of advice: don't give him too many types of powers; otherwise, you're going to have so much on your hands that you will lose track of what he has. Plus, with more and more powers, I feel like he's going to be further and further from being a lancer, which is his whole thing.

    Ch 10 Monster Slaying With Spear Boy
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus4mth
    Commented

    If he ever goes to the DC universe, he should be insanely OP, since there the biblical God is the one above all i think, and beings like Lucifer and Michael are among, if not the strongest in the verse.

    Ch 9 A Land Of Rotting Dead And One Spear Boy
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Commented

    It has been a while that I've been wanting to read a novel about Arcane, and this is absolutely gold, my man. Keep up the good work. It's a great novel.

    Ch 33 -33- A promise
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Commented

    I thought he wanted to stop being part of Urahara's game. What makes him think that Urahara would send him back after defeating Aizen?

    Ch 234 Chapter 199 - Aizen’s Move.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Replied to Tandoris

    That's fair

    Ch 230 Chapter 196 - Im here for the fight.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Replied to Tandoris

    Well, to your first point, I don't anyone who is about to die would think like that. "Oh, you know what, I'm not even gonna use my full power, cause even if I did I'd still lose, let me just die 🤷🏻‍♂️". And no, I wasn't talking about this, I was talking about the the hand and the foot, the nerf he has right now

    Ch 230 Chapter 196 - Im here for the fight.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Replied to TheMudkipHomie

    I get that, that's excatly my point. He's weaker than Yamamoto, we all knew he was going to lose, so let him fight with all his strenght, why nerf him?

    Ch 230 Chapter 196 - Im here for the fight.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus6mth
    Commented

    Bro, I really don't get this. Okay, from the beginning, it's understandable that he wouldn't win against Yamamoto, and I don't think anyone would complain about that. So why do they keep nerfing Adam? Even now, after he lost, it seems like he's going to fight with even more nerfs. The guy's going to fight with one hand and one foot. If he couldn't win before, there's not even a shred of enjoyment in reading this fight, not even with the new skill he learned.

    Ch 230 Chapter 196 - Im here for the fight.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus7mth
    Commented

    Bro, so nothing really changed? At all? Just his intentions? That's so frustating. If he knew, and we all know he knew, that Urahara would just use him for his plans, he could just tried to do something earlier. Maybe had this talk before, that he wold not accept being a pawn in someone elses game, or said that if he felt like he was being manipulated he would fk up his plans or something. Theres thousands of different ways to go about it. Even being thrutfull with his thoughts. But no, he decided to be a pawn and go with how the story should be. The frustating part about this is not even how that's not his personality at all, is also the fact that this IS A FANFICTION, it is supposed to be different from the original story, otherwise why is he there? What is he doing? Just running and complaining? And by the looks of it, he's not even stronger than he was when he got there. I don't get it man

    Ch 215 Chapter 182 - The Lost Son.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus7mth
    Commented

    Great story my brother. Keep up the good work!

    Ch 454 Chapter 454: Blinding the Dragon
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus7mth
    Commented

    I don't know, bro. I feel like this nerf (even though it's temporary) is really unnecessary. They just don't want to make him strong from the start. The whole point of his power in Fairy Tail was that his zanpakutou trained him to control his power well enough so he wouldn't hurt himself, and now he has become weaker because he can't control his power? Is he like a hurricane or something? I don't buy it, sorry. With that being said, I really like your story, and you're an awesome writer, my man. :)

    Ch 202 Chapter 172 - Training Match.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus7mth
    Commented

    Great chapter as always, my man. Just one thing though, and this is my personal preference. I would rather that the MC stayed in Soul Society instead of going to the human world with Kisuke and the other shinigamis. That's already what happens in every fanfiction. Let the MC stay in Soul Society, make a name for himself, get a good position, and everything. That way, when Ichigo goes to SS to rescue Rukia, you can create some interesting interactions between them all.

    Ch 9 Chapter nine: I'm strong.
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus9mth
    Replied to FluffyHaremPlz

    True that my friend

    'Captain Unohana… Is she worth risking my life for? Absolutely!'
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  • Ghuus
    Ghuus9mth
    Commented

    The only thing that worries me about this story is the fact that the author really likes Harems, and a harem in a world like iCarly would be incredible weird. But other than that, great work, loving it so far

    Ch 8 08 - iCarly on Twitch
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