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IMO you could just rush toward cannon if that would help the story flow and then do Flash back chapters to “ancient history” to explain the background. It worked decently for Magical Marvel (HP X Marvel) and would possibly let you write what will likely be easier and have more time to work on the harder completely original plot. Either way I have enjoyed the story so far and will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks.
I’d assume watered down OP at the moment, but gradually change to massively OP as he gets used to his new power and knowledge. I think it might be interesting if he is arrogant and gets humbled a lttle do to overconfidence in his new self without really training himself.
Dropping this story at chapter 13. The grammar is bad. Wrong choice of words, pronoun confusion and the sentences are choppy and difficult to follow. I think this has the potential to be a good story with some extreme editing to correct the errors and make it flow. As it currently reads, it’s not worth my time.
It should be patience not patient.
Nope it’s definitely square. It can hold 10 m^2 of designs. Lol.
Mc’s dad is the one who almost gote killed by a werewolf from a prank. Snape would hate the MC just as much.
1200 students would be 172 students per year.
I thought the jinchuriki was Kushina at this point in cannon.
Unless I am mistaken the sorcerers stone is no longer in the castle. This is the plot of the second book now no longer the first.
You do you. We appreciate the stories you right and while we would probably prefer to see this one through to the end, it is up to you. You don’t owe us anything. Good luck whichever way you choose.
I think that just naming it simply would be good. I personally like the name, “Infinity”. Because it ties into the idea that the only limit on magic is the imagination. So I vote for the club name to be Infinity or something along those lines. Infinity, Ouroboros, or such.