Einlion
I love this chapter. I read a lot of MHA fanfic but I believe most just allowed the attack to happen and let the villains escape; not before showing how good and better the MC is, of course. Or most just skipped this plot entirely. I believe if the MC hadn't declined the OFA; your MHA would likely have the same plot directions as the rest of MHA fanfics I've read, at least to this plot point.
The rate at which he gains power is too slow, but it would be better for mirio to be given OFA and he will be a better hero than Midoriya combined with his own quirk he would be OP. Author should just find a way to increase Mc growth rate, althought the original Deku injured himself everytime at least he had a scary strong determination and made a huge difference everytime there are problems. How will our current weak MC do compared to the OG? especialy during arcs like Eri's rescuing since the Original midoriya was the one to stop Chisaki? doesnt this mean that Eri will die along with many other heroes that were present during that raid on this fanfic since i ddoubt this guy can do better than the orignal Izuku at the rate of his power growth?