Comments of chapter undefined of Returning From The Magic World

First impression, I feel like reading a Chinese Urban Cultivation novel. The way MC acts, his inner monologues, plots, and spiritual energy for magic? 😒 I hope it's getting better in the next chap.

it's okay. The writing/editing needs some work as there are a couple sentences that are simply missing words, but it's easy enough to fill in the blanks while reading given the context.

makes no sense, the mc is thousands of years old and acts like a kid, can't make a simple decision, and he should know not to say anything.

hi author!, Will mc make academy magic later? considering he's a magus in another world, that seems interesting hahaha

whenever i see MC telling his family his secret, i always skip it and pretend nothing happened . don't know why but i find it cringe

For now, good story.

nice chapter

I appreciate how the MC was sent back to Earth using the expertise of a Magus/Archmage(?). I hope he does not become naive or slow-witted. So far, I think the story is good.

incrível , muito incrível. 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Not a bad first chapter but it's definitely in need of editing. It can throw off many readers (me included) but good work so far.

meh

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