ClasslessAscension
I'm really liking where this is going so far, although I like your style of storytelling in general, tbf. the only thing I would say would be nice is if you take your time with building the world and characters and stuff. there's no need to rush everything, we're already reading. a story with a good buildup has much better satisfying moments when all that wait pays off. can't wait to read more about Jack's adventures!
honestly, I don't think I've read one of your books that I didn't like, CA, however I do feel it's too early to give a review without it just being basically the fact that you're back and as such, your hilarious writing style is back, I am intrigued by this mfer though, he'd fit in with the others so well lol
Loved all of your works thus far. The best part is the writing and storytelling style used in conjunction with refreshing humor, self reflecting and evolving characthers. In these stories, I know that the MC will likely succedd, but the creative route and engaging side charachters keep me coming back I dont like the lenght of some of the chapters, (but if I get too much goodies it may not be the best for me either way). Also the story is a bit fast with all of the introductions and new places making it harder to keep up. Overall, I love this and will keep reading, if possible.