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sorry to hear it's rough bro. especially when you're low on $ it's hard to justify therapy, but solo or couples therapy could be a good idea. story is going well, I think this floors idea is good. and it's nice to see his old items/skills back! I wonder what form his ship will take this floor.
what do you mean, actions have consequences? :o good writing :) but if shizu wants to walk away from some responsibilities, it's not so bad. also very fixable if she does want to keep princessing, I feel like without vesper, they'd probably revert back to neutral. I wonder if shade and maruki will stay if she's not a princess!
Vesper is far from blameless, putting a potentially unstable energy source directly below her city while she experiments on it. but I like that you introduce consequences/morality in an important, but also avoidable/ignorable way! classic gaming ignorance :)
chapter 100! congrats!
Sorry author. I am really enjoying the story so far, but the last few chapters have had a lot of spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and nonsensical statements. I think you really need to spend more time on editing or get an editor (back?). But I really do like the story, world built so far, and where it's going! I will keep reading :) Keep up the good work! If you need to take rest, take rest. Or get an editor.
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