Comments of chapter undefined of Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

Does he really think that his physical ability can compensate for his lack of magic? Dude, even if he increases his movement speed in simple duel, what is he planning to do with his small core ? What's he going to do if even a powerful spell will consume him immediately, Is he going to punch wands from a distance? Maybe he played too much street fighter? You ruined the story just because of some loving family bulls♡♡t.

Giving him a small magic core and having him “compensate physically” is just idiotic. Idk what was going through your mind when you decided to make him magically weak in HP. While people will be learning spells in hogwarts, he’ll be doing pushups

Should have trusted my gut when I saw a harry potter fic with the cover being a guy with a *ing SWORD

Y did u make him weak in a magic world 🙄

Y did u make him weak in a magic world x2

What’s happening to your dxd fanfic???

lol. will be a magic paladin with his shield xD

why not just si into Lockhart instead if creating an oc that is just like him.

I like the story so far. but don't lean into the pervert side too much. That tends to ruin stories fast and they don't last long.

He can be like gandalf

Sinceramente esse mc é muito burro,literalmente ele não entende que em um mundo de magia o corpo é subjetivo,ele poderia em vez de ter pego o a besteira sexual e de aparência poderia ter pego afinidade extrema para ritual e quem sabe ter pego vidência,e através dos rituais lentamente dominar outras áreas e até se tornar bonito,só teria um trabalho maior que vale apena

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Kinda sad that everyone always want to kill of Luna's mother.

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interesting 🤔🤔

Interesting