Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece : The Supreme Conqueror System ( Fanfiction )

character's reaction doesn't make sense if he were an actual soldier. Transitioned to quickly from accessing the situation to enthusiastically checking out his system and talking to himself. seems very immature.

looks interesting, and as long as the mc is not dense, no be naive, a non-sentient system, I don't know the future but it looks like that to me, so it's fine with me.

My only nitpick would be the talking outloud unless all of the dialogue were his thoughts. If they are just him thinking you should use ‘…’ instead of “…” to specify it. Besides that, it’s looks alright to me.

it should be strength vitality agility dexterity intelegence like not strength ability stamina charisma that just wrong so my advice you should do this

Very promising. hope it’s live up to it potential.

thanks for this chapter

How old is he in his new body?

Nice

Thanks for chap <3

Supreme Conquering yet it's just pirates and marines. What about women, islands, kingdoms, pirate groups, government, celestial, territories?

this mc is the worst conqueror in the world why make a story about a conqueror system and have you mc have the typical loser mindset

Gracias por el capitulo

Man, systems seems too extensive. Quests, shop and inventory especially. Status is fine, but now hes just gets powers and commands from nowhere.

If only it was a supreme conqueror haki and not system, would have been more than your average system pick. Ffs now most novel uses system that it becomes so stale and boring

That was a lot of info

Buenos capitulo gracias

Thanks for the chapter