shirou_sureiya
Im 15 years old im enjoying my boring life by reading manga manhua manwha and novel and watching anime
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you sure this guy is marine because he does not have a personality of one
#die from cringe#
then use yor author's authority to give the mc a skill Adaptive reflexes
thats way to op bro [REJECTED]
if that was the case satoru would have ten shadows technique or suguro curse spirit manipulation and cleave and dismantle after he he sees sukuna using it
no its probably a kekkei tota considering not every senju clan has it only hashirama or probably if your ashura reincarnation if im not the combination will be water earth and yang
and give the power of 5 basic elements you know like fire water earth wind lightning and they combined and fuse with each other like the avatar state and there will have an upgrade to there power also give an enhance physical capabilities like enchance strength enchance vitality enchance agility enchance dexterity enchance intelligence
you should do some like this strength vitality agility dexterity intelligence not something like this strength dexterity stamina you make the mc some kind of rubber band or the gear fourth tank man of luffy
author i think you should change it to vitality you know like this strength vitality agility dexterity intelligence
the next we know she become the gun devil maybe the author should make her the gun devil no the weapon devil in her awakening of her fruit
its neji
what the fuck is this you said his memories got erase then why the fuck does he know he is another world why does act atleast like an adult why the fuck does he know about that this setting is like chinese and answer me you stupid fuck if his memories is got erase he should act around his age and not remember somethings if i were you just rewrite this while its still in early chapters just reincarnate him with his memories because pretty sure your going to use some other references and knowledges that only and earthling would know if you dont then this fanfic will have alot of plot holes which makes everyone question this shit