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shirou_sureiya

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Im 15 years old im enjoying my boring life by reading manga manhua manwha and novel and watching anime

2020-10-06 JoinedPhilippines
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya11h
    Replied to Bananaking123

    how about the manga version

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    [Multiverse] Sex System In Highschool DxD
    Anime & Comics · GodlyMadara
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya2d
    Posted

    why make his back story a marine captain when the mc even didn't act like one because being a marine doesn't have a guy like that much less a captain because if he is really a marine he would not be acting like an idiot just rewrite this author

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    Wolverine in The Boys
    TV · Anomander_Adaar
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya2d
    Commented

    you sure this guy is marine because he does not have a personality of one

    "I only read a few comics and I'm pretty sure Wolverine isn't even that strong… I'm fucked, aren't I?... Though at least I'm biologically immortal… I think," I say out loud again almost trying to convince myself this isn't real. 
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    Wolverine in The Boys
    TV · Anomander_Adaar
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya2d
    Replied to LonelyTiger

    we want a fucking sypnosis not a fucking a verse you stupid fuck how the hell do we know which is which and what is what

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    Emperor Reborn (In DxD)
    Anime & Comics · LonelyTiger
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya3d
    Replied to Yanis_Hoferick

    yeah he did. when the system said choose a name he think chaos overlord sounds cool and the system registered it

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    Naruto: New Begining
    Anime & Comics · HermitOfLifeMount
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya3d
    Commented

    #die from cringe#

    Transform!
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    Mecha Battle: Why Do You Use Body to Destroy Stars?
    Eastern · Super Flash Lightning Cat
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya7d
    Replied to xlntz

    bobo noob

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    Global Awakening: Apocalypse Ender's Chronicle
    Fantasy · xlntz
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya7d
    Posted

    the mc is fucking stupid like who in the right would choose a fucking AI rebellion and fairy collisions and the mc seriously choose a shelter and food pact he should have choose water and stealth pact instead what fucking moron your disgrace to be a fucking filipino pre putang ina mo gago ka bobo

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    Global Awakening: Apocalypse Ender's Chronicle
    Fantasy · xlntz
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya8d
    Commented

    then use yor author's authority to give the mc a skill Adaptive reflexes

    I want to hear your thoughts on it to avoid any possible plot hole.
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya10d
    Replied to Ren_dover

    thats way to op bro [REJECTED]

    A/N: At first I didn't know how to actually introduce the quintuplets without it being forced, but then an idea occurred so in a couple of chapters before the school arc starts Imma introduced one of them. 
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    Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya11d
    Posted

    it was okay in early chapter but after 250+ chapters the mc become fucking stupid piece of shit of disappointment even that guy thought using holy grail to wish of his destroyed manuscript when he can rewrite it and even let Bartholomei lorelei go after what she had done what fucking pussy

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    As a Mangaka at TYPE-MOON!
    Anime & Comics · XElenea
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya11d
    Commented

    if that was the case satoru would have ten shadows technique or suguro curse spirit manipulation and cleave and dismantle after he he sees sukuna using it

    I think it's exclusive unless you have Hashirama's Genes or the Chakra Reserve like Naruto and Chakra Control like Naruto (Because of the Six Eyes)
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    Naruto with Curse Techniques
    Anime & Comics · Asura_7uh
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya11d
    Commented

    no its probably a kekkei tota considering not every senju clan has it only hashirama or probably if your ashura reincarnation if im not the combination will be water earth and yang

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    Naruto with Curse Techniques
    Anime & Comics · Asura_7uh
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya11d
    Commented

    and give the power of 5 basic elements you know like fire water earth wind lightning and they combined and fuse with each other like the avatar state and there will have an upgrade to there power also give an enhance physical capabilities like enchance strength enchance vitality enchance agility enchance dexterity enchance intelligence

    A/N: At first I didn't know how to actually introduce the quintuplets without it being forced, but then an idea occurred so in a couple of chapters before the school arc starts Imma introduced one of them. 
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    Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya12d
    Commented

    you should do some like this strength vitality agility dexterity intelligence not something like this strength dexterity stamina you make the mc some kind of rubber band or the gear fourth tank man of luffy

    --Status-- 
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    Dragon from Winterfell
    Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya12d
    Replied to Muzan_Zoldyck

    if its really readable as you said then thank you and i think you need to see a psychiatrist just in case because chinese fanfic can make someone insane

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    Marvel: Reincarnated as Aldrich Killian
    Movies · Muzan_Zoldyck
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya13d
    Commented

    author i think you should change it to vitality you know like this strength vitality agility dexterity intelligence

    Resilience 10 (Adult Men 10)
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    The Big Bang Assassin (The Big Bang Theory)
    Movies · BlackNilton
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya15d
    Commented

    the next we know she become the gun devil maybe the author should make her the gun devil no the weapon devil in her awakening of her fruit

    "One is not enough, I will kill them all!" Baby-5 shouted, as those around her were surprised by the rage of this woman who had just appeared. Baby-5 looked at each one of them. "You broke and messed up the Captain's room!" She exclaimed with a look of rage, leaving everyone, both allies and enemies, stunned. She began to transform into various weapons with her arm and started firing shots, making it difficult for CP9 to approach the Straw Hats. 
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    One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya15d
    Commented

    its neji

    "And the instructions to kill this man with a mark on his forehead, maybe he is that common enemy?"
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • shirou_sureiya
    shirou_sureiya16d
    Replied to Mr_Moringstar

    what the fuck is this you said his memories got erase then why the fuck does he know he is another world why does act atleast like an adult why the fuck does he know about that this setting is like chinese and answer me you stupid fuck if his memories is got erase he should act around his age and not remember somethings if i were you just rewrite this while its still in early chapters just reincarnate him with his memories because pretty sure your going to use some other references and knowledges that only and earthling would know if you dont then this fanfic will have alot of plot holes which makes everyone question this shit

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    Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Mr_Moringstar
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