AnathaShesha
Author if I have to be honest your story is better than 95% of the other novels here. Maybe I'm biased because I really like novels like this and MC's personality is spot on with the possesiveness i like, but even objectively it's great story because of the unique/ rarely used ideas. Keep it up and TFTC!
Your book is far better than alot of other novels. Writing just like everything else takes practice. You know those cool trick shot videos that make you amazed. What you never see is the hours of fails it took for them to succeed. Same with reading a good book. You never see the hours of failed novels the author wrote before to get to novel you are reading. Keep up the good work.
Dear Writer I hope that you see this; Your writing is amazing. It may to you seem quite simple however it is complex in many ways. you allow the characters to bloom organically and for the readers to truly become one with the characters. It is truly inspirational and deeply engaging to read. I started this yesterday and have already reached this far if sleep were not necessary to survive I'd have already finished all you have this far. You have created a harmony of people and characters that simply speaks for itself. All of their quirks and funny comments makes it both light hearted and serious at times. The balance between character and story is amazing I actually hope that you take this and publish it I for one would love to own it in print. Further I think talent should be acknowledged and you have talent that other writers would kill for. Truly your work is on a different level. It allows people to forget themselves in reading and become one of the family where you are both loved and accepted. Words can do little justice. I have cried, laughed and felt seething rage with the characters you are truly a creative worth following. Sincerely A Fan