Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon

Author if I have to be honest your story is better than 95% of the other novels here. Maybe I'm biased because I really like novels like this and MC's personality is spot on with the possesiveness i like, but even objectively it's great story because of the unique/ rarely used ideas. Keep it up and TFTC!

Really loving this novel,Keep up the good work👍. Also don’t drop this or else👹👹👹.

author keep it up, really love the novel

U mentioned eye lasers u have my undivided attention now that and the book rocks so far keep up the good work

love you to keep it up

Don't worry author san u r good 😊😊😊

author is his father really dead and will he take that succubus as a mate I can understand if he don't can't the vampire beacuse when he was sick she cared very little for him while that dragon lord she look Down on his existence

this book is freaking awsome!!!

Your story is good. Of course, like any other work, it has its problems, but the more you write and dedicate yourself to the story, the more you will evolve and improve. Over time the story will naturally gain more depth, complexity and life. So please don't give up and keep up the great work.

Thx for the chap

Dear Writer I hope that you see this; Your writing is amazing. It may to you seem quite simple however it is complex in many ways. you allow the characters to bloom organically and for the readers to truly become one with the characters. It is truly inspirational and deeply engaging to read. I started this yesterday and have already reached this far if sleep were not necessary to survive I'd have already finished all you have this far. You have created a harmony of people and characters that simply speaks for itself. All of their quirks and funny comments makes it both light hearted and serious at times. The balance between character and story is amazing I actually hope that you take this and publish it I for one would love to own it in print. Further I think talent should be acknowledged and you have talent that other writers would kill for. Truly your work is on a different level. It allows people to forget themselves in reading and become one of the family where you are both loved and accepted. Words can do little justice. I have cried, laughed and felt seething rage with the characters you are truly a creative worth following. Sincerely A Fan

loving the book so far! it's very entertaining! just please make it so seras stays a virgin for life after what she did to my boy!

top 5 in my opinion. would buy on kindle.

butcher humanss

love your novel, I've been trying to get back into reading. This is first new novel I've read in over a month.

bruh imagine such a great story with such in-depth detail of every single character just stopping. I'm not going to lie there will be a few tables that get flipped. Your boy might just become a dragon himself so keep up the great work for so far you are an outstanding author

thank for the chapter.and will MC be lewdind lusamina Eris and yara

just started reading this story last night and im hooked love the characters and story. can't wait to read more!!