Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: A Broken Dream

.... I will literally throw my computer out the window if he reveals his origins like he done in the simulation. Saying he can see the 'future' which is not acceptable

So dumb. Hes barely a chunin level shinobi at 14, sure his improvement has been decent but not prodigy level. Why would danzo do this? Instant drop for forcing him into root this hard

"Game over" for Mc... By the time he said "Naruto Uzumaki" when asked about the village in general, without having contact with him, it's already mandatory to do a complete mind reading… Danzo boy, even if it's Danzo, he's the boss of Root, there is no reason. for beating around the bush, he reads his mind completely, for the worse, a Yamanaka always accompanies him... There's no way to save yourself unless you use Plot Armor, lower Danzo's IQ, or block MC's mind... As for a forced plot, I disagree, there is always a justification for character actions and changes to the story (there are plot holes and a bit of "plot armor" for me, but not a plot forced). .. My opinion: He should have left Konoha as soon as he found out he had a system... Not trying to improve his strength, but camouflage and escape abilities... Konoha is Game Over, with Danzo, Root and Orochimaru (Not to mention if we add Hiruzen)...

He was an idiot for talking to him when he knows he has Shisui’s eye. He should only talk to Danzo in Hiruzen’s presence.

I agree with the previous comments, it is very forced, but I will continue reading, encouragement author.

forced plot

2 options about what just happened 1) Danzo used Shishui's eye Would be forced plot and make no sense given how limited he is in using it 2) Danzo used a genjutsu Which means that he could do it again, but hasn't signed off MC as an enemy yet, and is giving him another chance As for the fact that itself that Danzo went to him, I don't get why people are complaining. In the simulation he never noticed being stalked and didn't hide his progress. In reality, he only discovered that he was being watched when the stalker changed from Sai to someone else. That means that he had been stalked before too. Don't forget that the Aburame elder has some underhanded deals with Danzo, and because of that MC was already under slight observation. But what actually changed is him hiding his power, that is the first thing Danzo noticed now too. For Danzo, an above average sprout is useful for Konoha but not yet interesting enough to take for Root. But the same guy hiding this sudden sprouting strength? Possible traitor or flight risk. Hence the first question being "What do you think of Konoha"

Dk y so many ppl are complaining about a forced plot, it's not as if the quality of the story is going to experience a drop and maybe Danzo's sudden interest is explained later. Doesn't mean the story is any less interesting than it previously was imo.

Such a forced plot point…i knew it’d get to this point, how predictable

Why he suddenly became a center of attention? Why did Danzo sent Sai to spy on him in the first place? Sounds ridiculous, it looks like every villain wants MC dead, will Itachi dig into him as well when he visits Konoha soon?

I can't wait for another chapter. Keek up this tempo author :D !!!!

Thx for the chapter author XD XD

dropped, what a waste

So he never meet Naruto nor encounter him..that was his mistake living for many years but afraid of "main character"..... But know Danzou 😑 without meeting him nor know his position.....in konoha

Thx for the chapter

this system seems more geared towards a normal mundane world than naruto. mind numbing work without any real benefit. with a bit more of reality you would die before you can even make use of the system. it's like one of those big games that's so Complex that after a couple of weeks run it just Dissapears.

gracia por el capitulo