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Comments of chapter undefined of My randomic road to power

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

The author contradicts himself in the story. One moment the skill is lvl 8 and the next the mc increases it to 7. In one chapter the C is 14 years old and then a few chapters later the author switches to 16 without bothering to edit the previous chapters.

PrepareThyAnus
PrepareThyAnusLv4PrepareThyAnus

ADHD ≠ Alzheimer’s

Gordon_2208:We need to remember that he has ADHD so we shouldnt be complaining that much
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

the age thing ruined and is unnecessary they going to be like 30 and still in UA

Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

too much TELLING and not enough SHOWING. It reads like a shopping list. I went here did this. I did this and got that etc.. it could be good but between the poor English and the social anxiety part it's simply cringe.

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

Meeting Mina before UA in such a contrived manner? I would remove this from the story.

Bangbangbangboom
BangbangbangboomLv15Bangbangbangboom

he should get with momo and jiro feed the harem

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octoberwind
octoberwindLv4octoberwind

bro this is so good good job keep it up

PrepareThyAnus
PrepareThyAnusLv4PrepareThyAnus

This is so forced and tbh kinda annoying

Gordon_2208
Gordon_2208Lv1Gordon_2208

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

I really hate the skills that you have bought that he could have just done himself, like seriously? shoulder dash? test.

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

Buenos capitulo

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

Wachdog
WachdogLv4Wachdog

Author, smoke more and keep writing

victor_arreaza
victor_arreazaLv1victor_arreaza

Thanks for the chapter

Damiency
DamiencyLv1Damiency

thanks for the chapter

_ghibbo_
_ghibbo_Lv3_ghibbo_

I'm really enjoying this, really good job :D