Comments of chapter undefined of STRANGERS- FAR FROM HOME

STRANGERS- FAR FROM HOME

FA3zy

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JakeWilliam1432xxLv3JakeWilliam1432xx

I added it to my library and I love it so far because I love suspense. I hope there is no love angle in the story as I am not a fan of romances. and I would like to suggest that you don't write it like Smith: the things he said etc I hope you understand my point. it's a nice story so far

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FA3zyAuthorFA3zy

I'll do some thorough editing on my free time, thanks alot

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Sakura_CharmashLv2Sakura_Charmash

This has a very Hollywood movie sequence feel to it! going to the library out of sheer curiosity . Good work!

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Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

Bad grammar... Bad punctuation ... This looks like a work in progress bit try to edit chapters a little before posting

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MoonwritingLv4Moonwriting

An intense read....curious and going to read more

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DymenSLv3DymenS

Ok so far it sounds interesting.

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RedmonitorLv2Redmonitor

Intreeging to say the least!

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NyxReveuseLv2NyxReveuse

Hmm interesting...👀

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Juliet_OmuadonaLv4Juliet_Omuadona

What is his task? 🤔🤔

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FA3zyAuthorFA3zy

Thanks..If you have some hints To add you can let me know

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SereinchooLv2Sereinchoo

So far so good

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SoniiNaazLv3SoniiNaaz

Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter 😍😍

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Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

No probs bro 🌚👍

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